2007 Essay Contest Winners
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| Sarah Hagan |
1st Place Essay – 2007
Sarah Hagan
Deer-Creek – Lamont Public Schools
11th Grade
Biofuels: A False Hope for America’s Energy Crisis
Biofuels, a hot topic in the world today, are actually nothing
new. Henry Ford’s Model T was actually designed to
run on either ethanol, a type of biofuel, or gasoline (Lavelle
par. 6). Ethanol was pushed aside in favor of petroleum because
gasoline was cheaper to produce. With oil prices rising,
biofuels are gaining popularity and interest (Lavelle par. 7).
The two main types of biofuel are biodiesel and ethanol.
Biodiesel, formed from natural resources including vegetable
oils and animal fats, is used as a diesel replacement (What is
Biodiesel? par. 1). It can also be made from used fryer oil
(Aronow par. 2). If blended with diesel, biodiesel will run
in most regular diesel engines without any modifications (What
is Biodiesel? par. 1). Ethanol is an alcohol-based fuel that
is most commonly produced from corn. It is often blended
with gasoline to help cut carbon emissions (Ethanol par. 1-2). To
make ethanol, the corn is ground up, and the sugar is either dissolved
from the material or the starch is turned into sugar. Microbes,
or microorganisms, are fed the sugar which they then turn into
ethanol and carbon dioxide (How is Ethanol Made?
par. 2). Another type of ethanol, cellusoic ethanol, is made
from waste materials including saw dust, waste paper, and corn
stalks. Instead of relying on starch, cellulosic ethanol
relies on cellulose, a material found in the cell walls of plant
cells. Cellulose can be transformed into sugar; however,
it is more difficult than transforming starches into sugar. (How
is Ethanol Made? par. 1)
The world is in the midst of an energy crisis. Every year
our demand for oil grows 2 percent. Some experts believe
that oil production will soon peak and that may even lead to the
ceasing of the production of oil (Motavalli par. 4). Other
concerns that have led to the consideration of biofuel as a viable
alternative to gasoline and diesel include recent oil prices and
the fear of global warming. The country is currently learning
that too much dependence on any single item presents a problem. Finding
an alternative to petroleum-based fuel has proved to be extremely
costly and time-consuming. However, it is something that
must be done. Biofuels do not currently present a long-term
solution for our energy crisis.
The production of biofuels is presenting as many problems as
opportunities. The nation relies nearly solely on corn for
raising pigs, chicken, and cattle. With more and more corn
being used to make ethanol, corn prices have doubled from two dollars
a bushel to four dollars a bushel since 2006 (Lavelle par. 14).
With the lucrative corn market, many farmers are switching to planting
corn instead of soybeans. This has led to soybean prices
increasing thirty percent (Hagenbaugh par. 12). Since corn
is involved in the production of almost everything we eat including
cereals, sodas, meats, and dairy products, these higher prices
in the supermarket may “spark inflationary concerns” (Hagenbaugh
par. 6-7). Due to rising corn prices, Mexico has faced escalating
tortilla prices; the government was required to step in to control
pricing (Hagenbaugh par. 8). As more biofuel is produced,
food prices will continue to rise. Analysts estimate that
producing biodiesel could require the soybean crop of the entire
country (Jackson par. 6). A spokesperson for the National Biodiesel
Board (NBB) even stated that it is not realistic to grow crops
for biodiesel. The NBB also estimates that biodiesel could
only supply ten percent of the fuel needed for America (Mottavali
par. 55-56).
Corn depletes the soil of its nutrients and requires more fertilizers
and insecticides than crops such as soybeans (Lavelle par. 18). The
fertilizer used on corn to replace the nitrogen the corn sucks
from the soil is derived from natural gas. Atrazine, a common
pesticide used on corn, is petroleum-based. So, we are still
dependent on fossil fuels (Carrels par. 9). These chemicals
often end up tainting our water supply (Lavelle par. 18).
Biofuels are praised by scientists and environmentalists as being
carbon neutral. Carbon dioxide, one of the byproducts of
burning fossil fuels, is being blamed as one of the causes of global
warming. Corn converts carbon dioxide into oxygen. Then,
when corn is used to produce ethanol the carbon is released back
into the air (Carrels par. 9). Therefore, some assume that
ethanol does no harm; however, there is more to consider. Unlike
gasoline, ethanol cannot be transported through pipelines. Therefore,
it must be transported by trains, trucks, or barges. This
means emitting more carbon dioxide into the air (Halperin par.
8). Other things that need to be taken into consideration
include the energy consumed and the carbon dioxide emitted in planting,
fertilizing, harvesting, transporting, cooking, and producing the
ethanol. Many ethanol plants are fueled by coal. Because
of the vast amount of energy needed to produce ethanol, some studies
find that ethanol uses more energy than it produces (Carrels par.
9). It takes seven gallons of gasoline to create ten gallons
of ethanol (Carey par. 13). Ethanol has a lower energy content
than gasoline; therefore, it takes about 1.5 gallons of ethanol
to drive as far as one could on 1 gallon of gasoline (Lavelle par.
22).
We should continue to look into different options for meeting
our energy needs. Great strides are being made in biofuel
research. Making biodiesel and ethanol from waste materials
may prove to be a viable option. Oklahoma has the potential
to become a leader in energy production once again. It will
require hard work and the support of all Oklahomans. In the
mean time, we should all try to limit our energy consumption. Simple
measures such as purchasing a more fuel-efficient car will impact
the world. We must always strive to look for better ways
of doing things. Biofuel has potential. With more research
and experimentation, Oklahoma could be at the center of biofuel
production.
Works Cited
Aronow, Louisa. “Fueling Brazil’s Future.” Americas Vol.
56 No. 6:46-51. SIRS: Environment #62
Carey, John and Adrienne Carter. “Food vs. Fuel.” Business
Week Online 2007: 80-83. Academic Search Elite. EBSCOhost.
Coweta High School Media Center, Coweta. 28 Feb. 2007. http://web.ebscohost.com.
Carrels, Peter. “Global Warming Threatens-Corn-Based Ethanol
not Solution.” Aberdeen News. 4 Mar. 2007. www.aberdeennews.com.
25 Mar. 2007.
Ethanol. 14 June 2006. U.S. Department of Energy. 24 Mar.
2007 www.eere.energy.gov/afdc/altfuel/ethanol.html.
Hagenbaugh, Barbara. “Corn has Deep Economic Roots.” USA
Today 25 Jan. 2007. Academic Search Elite. EBSCOhost.
Coweta High School Media Center, Coweta. 28 Feb. 2007. http://web.ebscohost.com.
Halperin, Alex. “Ethanol: Myths and Realities.” Business
Week Online. 19 May 2006. www.businessweek.com.
25 Mar. 2007.
How is Ethanol Made? 13 Oct. 2004. U.S. Department of
Energy. 24 Mar. 2007 www.eere.energy.gov/afdc/altfuel/eth_made.html.
Jackson, Bill. “Greenhouse Gases: Problems and Opportunities.” Greeley
Tribune 22 Feb. 2007. Newspaper Source. EBSCOhost.
Coweta High School Media Center, Coweta. 26 Feb. 2007. www.ebscohost.com.
Lavelle, Marianne and Bret Schulte. “Is Ethanol the Answer?” U.S.
News & World Report 12 Feb 2007:30-39.
Academic Search Elite. EBSCOhost. Coweta High School Media Center,
Coweta. 28 Feb 2007. http://web.ebscohost.com.
Motavalli, Jim. “The Outlook on Oil.” E Magazine Vol.
XVII Jan./Feb. 2006:26-39. SIRS:Environment #66.
What is Biodiesel? 30 September 2005. U.S. Department of Energy.
24 Mar. 2007 http://www.eere.energy.gov/afdc/altfuel/whatis_biodiesel.html.

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| Abby Winstone |
Abby Winstone – 1st Runner Up
Ninnekah High School, Ninnekah, OK
11th Grade
Answering Our Fuel Crisis
What will happen when we run out of the nonrenewable resources
that are used for energy? Will we simply stop using energy,
or find an alternate source? Actually, alternate forms of
energy are already being discovered and used in many areas where
our resources are being quickly depleted. Biofuels, although
they may not be the complete solution to our energy needs, are
one of the many options to answer our energy crisis.
What are biofuels? Biofuel is any fuel that is derived from
biomass-recently living organisms or their metabolic byproducts,
such as manure from cows (Biofuel). Why should we use biofuels? The
answer is simple: Biofuel is made from materials that would ordinarily
become waste and pollute our environment but can provide an alternate
source of fuel for our changing world. Biofuels are biodegradable
and are relatively harmless to the environment (Biofuel). Most
researchers have considered the fact that the use of gasoline and
other nonrenewable fuel sources will have great consequences in
the near future, such as releasing toxic emissions harmful to the
ozone. Use of biofuels reduces toxic air emissions, and greenhouse
gas buildup (Biomass Today). Many of the environmental problems
that our world deals with today are the result of harmful chemicals
released in the burning of fossil fuels.
Some biofuels in use today have been utilized for centuries, such
as wood and plant materials. New forms of biofuels, however,
are food crops, grassy and woody plants, residues from agriculture
or forestry, the organic component of municipal and industrial
waste, and fumes from landfills such as methane (NREL: Learning-
Biomass Energy Basics). Another newfound source of energy
is the peanut. The oil is being extracted to produce usable
fuel energy. Not only do the new forms of energy reduce the
use of fossil fuels, but also make the environment a safe, cleaner
place. The increasing use of biofuels can also have a positive
impact on our economy. The use of biomass can reduce dependence
on foreign oil because biofuels can be produced locally. (NREL:
Learning -Biomass Energy Basics). Using biomass creates new
business opportunities and jobs. The use of biomass supports
the United States Agriculture and Forest product industries by
using: paper mill residue, lumber mill scrap, municipal waste,
corn, and soybeans (NREL: Learning- Biomass Energy Basics). These
alternate forms of fuel come in many different forms; however,
biomass is the only renewable energy source that can be converted
directly into liquid fuel. The two most common biofuels are
ethanol and biodiesel (NREL: Learning Biofuels). Ethanol
is an alcohol, the same as in beer and wine, but is modified to
make it undrinkable (NREL: Learning Biofuels). The production
of ethanol has come a long way and appears to be a promising resource
for the future.
There are two sides to every argument, especially those that involve
our environment and something as essential as our energy source. Some
scientists believe we should utilize the resources that are normally
wasted such as plant and animal compost and methane gasses. With
the depleting nonrenewable resources that are so heavily relied
on fading fast, it is essential to discover alternate ways to produce
energy. The production of biofuels is one way we can provide
our world with a sustainable, alternate energy source.
With the use of biofuels becoming more popular, the prices of
corn and other crops produced to make biofuels has gone up. This
price increase helps the farm economy by creating a new market
for these products. The price increase however, is not good
for everyone; for example, the price of animal feed is also increasing,
which hurts the ranching economy. Another problem we face
with the increased planting and production of biomass to produce
fuel is soil erosion. It is essential that we also manufacture
equipment that is soil-friendly. We may find in the long
run that the energy needed to harvest the biomass exceeds the energy
gained from the biofuel itself. Because of this, we must
discover a way to make the energy products an economically wise
answer to the fuel question.
Oklahoma is know for its energy production service, and also for
its agricultural side. These two fields can be combined in
the production of biofuels (Kerr Center Institute). Oklahoma
has already found an active role to play in biofuel production. Oklahoma
has thousands of acres of land poorly suited for producing crops,
yet can and does almost naturally produce a very usable resource-switchgrass
(Ag at OSU). The market for switchgrass itself is not very
good. However, a new development has arisen; to produce ethanol
from the native Oklahoma grass.
Both sides of the argument should definitely be addressed in deciding
an alternate fuel source. I believe there may not be such
a thing as a completely sustainable resource for our world, however
I do believe that we must work together to find different ways
to fulfill our energy crisis. Biofuel seems to be one of
the most promising alternatives in action today. The continued
use of biofuels will have an overall positive influence on our
economy and environment as a whole. Using biofuels is one
of the many answers to the sustainable resource question.

Works Cited
Addison, Keith. “Biofuels.”
Biofuels: Journey to Forever. 12 Feb. 2007
http://journeytoforever.org/biofuel.html.
Causley, Fred. “Growing Potential...Biofuels: Home
Grown on the Range.”
Online at OSUOklahoma State University. 9 March 2007
www.okstate.edu/ag/agedcm4th/ag-news/ag@osu/sp98/sp98_5.htm.
Ho, Kevin. Biofuel. 4 Feb. 2007. Columbia
University/Wikipedia. 8 Feb. 2007
file://A:Biofuel@20encyclopedia.htm.
Kerr Center. “2007 Essay Contest.” Kerr
Center Institute. 1 March 2007
NREL: Learning-Biofuels. 22 January 2007. National
Renewable Energy Laboratory.
4 Feb. 2007 www.nrel.gov/learning/re_biofuels.html?print.

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| Zachary Rice |
Zachary Rice –
Honorable Mention
Pawnee High School, Pawnee, OK
12th Grade
Renewable Energy:
Are Bio-Fuels the Answer to Our Fuel Crisis?
With the constant rise and fall concerning the manufacturing of
fuel, people are seeking new methods of producing alternative types
of energy. Even the government is providing subsidies to
conduct ongoing research in this area. Are bio-fuels the
final answer to our current fuel crisis? Are they truly renewable,
and if they are, can they be sustained for a long period of time? Should
we use food crops to produce energy? These are all very important
things to consider regarding this rather controversial topic. First,
one must examine the definition of a bio-fuel. According
to The American Heritage Science Dictionary, a bio-fuel
is defined as being a fuel produced from renewable resources, especially
plant biomass, vegetable oils, and treated municipal and industrial
wastes. Some people believe that the production of bio-fuels
is one way to utilize our current resources to meet our nation’s
growing energy needs. On the other hand, others feel that
using bio-fuels is simply a short-term solution to a global problem. Because
no one actually knows when our fossil fuels will be entirely depleted,
I believe that it is imperative that we continue to search for
alternative means of producing energy.
Proponents of the bio-fuel industry claim that our nation is equipped
with agricultural resources to produce these so-called renewable
fuels. Our nation has an enormous amount of land that is
not being utilized at this time. We also have access to animal
waste, forests, and landfills that we could possibly use for bio-fuels. In Resource
Insights, “Nonrenewable Renewables: The Hidden Life
of Bio-fuels,” according to Kurt Cobb, “Those fuels,
ethanol from corn and bio-diesel from soybean soil, are touted
as the path to energy independence and clean air and as an answer
to global warming.” Using bio-diesel and biogas as
alternative fuels are not only advantageous to the consumer, but
also to the environment as well. The amount of carbon dioxide
released into the atmosphere through bio-fuel combustion is less
than that of fossil fuels. Ironically, though, every aspect
of the field work, including planting, maintaining, and harvesting
these crops, is accomplished by utilizing massive petroleum-powered
machinery.
Factions opposed to the mass production of bio-fuels argue that
bio-fuels are not sustainable. Although bio-fuels can be
processed from crops that are continually grown and harvested,
nonetheless, Cobb concludes, “This style of industrial farming
involves huge petroleum and natural gas inputs to fuel the machinery;
to make and apply the herbicides, pesticides, and fertilizers;
and to irrigate and harvest the crops.” Furthermore,
the consequences to the environment are sometimes devastating. Soil
erosion is a matter of utmost concern. According to a recent
study conducted by David Pimentel and Tad Patzek, soil is eroding
ten times faster than it is being replenished. Some areas
require irrigation, which in turn can lead to over pumping. As
a result, groundwater from aquifers in various regions is diminishing
more quickly than it can naturally be restored. Irrigation
can also damage the soil by leaving salt deposits, thus making
the soil unusable. Cobb states, “The current production
methods for bio-fuels are more like mining operations than farming
operations.”
Next, one must take into consideration the supply and demand concerning
food crops. If we continue using commodities such as corn
and soybean to produce bio-fuels, then the price of food will eventually
increase. Can the people of our country afford to pay higher
prices for food? Can most of the world’s population
afford to pay higher prices for food? Certainly not! According
to Cobb, “Some 2.7 billion people are currently considered
malnourished.” This is just another problem that would
arise if bio-fuels were to become our main source of energy in
the future.
In my opinion, we must find some other way to produce energy besides
being totally dependent on fossil fuels. While research is
being conducted to find more ways to produce alternative sources
of energy, I firmly believe that we should continue to utilize
bio-fuels. However, we must acknowledge the fact that bio-fuels
are unsustainable because of the devastating effects that they
cause to the environment. How long does it take for a forest
to grow back after all the trees have been cut down and used for
biomass? How long does take for an aquifer to return to its
natural state? Perhaps someday, we will have the technology
to produce bio-fuels without using fossil fuels. Until then,
there are many questions that will remain unanswered. Additionally,
our focus should be globally centered. Our research should
be geared toward the development of new technologies to reach untapped
fossil fuels. At some point in the future, I imagine that
our fossil fuels will most likely run out. Nevertheless,
it is up to us to preserve the natural resources that are presently
under our stewardship.
Works Cited
“Renewable Energy.” Resource Insight. 20
Feb 2007
http://resourceinsight.blogspot.com/2006/06/nonrenewable-renewables-hidden-life-of.html
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